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Write a letter to the president of your college about the unpleasant conditions of the university dormitory, and suggesting possible solutions

Dear Sir,

称呼:写作关系不亲密的个人
As I am a freshman, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the basic conditions of our dormitory.
第一段只有一句话,包含了2层信息:自我介绍以及写信目的。
(积累:It is my obligation to do…; make some suggestions concerning…)


Generally speaking, the dormitory building situates in a satisfying environment and is well-equipped.


However, there are two unpleasant aspects that cause inconvenience to us:
1) the heating system is in need of improvement—it fails to maintain warmth in our rooms during the winter;
2) the furniture is not designed in a practical manner –there lacks a shelf to place books.
第二段是提出建议及改进措施段。
第一句肯定所述对象的优点,为后面的改进意见做铺垫。
(积累:generally speaking, situate in…; well-equipped)
第二句是一个过渡句,转折到写信的根本目的上:提建议。建议共分2条,通过序号列出。
第三句提出第一条建议:改进供暖系统。
(积累:in need of; fail to do…)


第四句提出第二条建议:家具设计不实用。
(in a practical manner)
I would be more than happy if my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.
第三段只有一句话,对信件进行总结,表达了期待得到解决的真诚态度。
(I would be more than happy if…;take place )
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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