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发布时间:2017-08-07 来源:新东方在线 发布人:Too

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大学生就业类:

Study the picture above carefully and write an essay entitled “After Graduation”. In the essay, you should:
1.Describe the picture
2.Interpret its meaning
3.Give your opinion about the phenomenon.

After Graduation

文章标题


1Graduation is a divide between school and a full-time working. 2After graduation, we are no longer students meticulously protected by parents and teachers in every aspect, but a member of the real society.
3Let’s look at the picture first. 4A graduate is told by his teacher, “You must depend on yourself during your life journey after graduation…” 5He finds that some former graduates fly high into the sky while some experience a drastic fall.
【第一段是论说文现象描述段。】
第一、   二句从宏观上论说了毕业的意义,起到一个提纲挈
领的作用。
*meticulously细致地;



第三句到第五句是图画描述。
*句子剖析:第三句是过渡句。第四句是图画文字部分的诠释,采用直接引语的结构。第五句是画面内容的描述,that引导find的宾语从句,同时,该宾语从句是一个由while连接的并列句。
*depend on依赖;




1The picture tells us a principle. 2Graduation is not the end of your education, but the beginning of your real journey.
3At school, we may find we are no different from our classmates. 4However, there will be a great gap between us after graduation.
5Because we may have different opportunities and make different efforts in work. 6Some may try their best to improve themselves and become the mainstay of our era, while others experience the drastic fall.
【第二段是意义阐释段。】
第一、   二句是本段的主题句,总述图画的意义。
*句子剖析:第一句起过渡的作用。第二句是主旨句,该句是由but连接的并列句,but后省略了主语和系动词。
第三、四句简述在学校和进入社会的区别。
*句子剖析:第三句中的“we are…classmates”是find的宾语从句,省略了连接词that。
*different from与…不同;a gap between…
第五、六句阐释出现区别的原因。
*句子剖析:第六句是由while了解的并列复合句。
*make efforts努力;try one’s best to do…尽力去做某事。


1Therefore, we should remember that we should continue to try our best for a bright future after graduation rather than cease to strive.
2In this way, we may have the chance to fly high in the sky.
【第三段是论说文的方法建议段。】
第一句表明了面对图画现象的建议。
*continue to do …继续做某事; rather than do…而不是; cease to do…停止做某事。


第二句是本段的小结句,强调上面建议的重要性。
*have the chance to do…有机会做某事

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