发布时间：2016-03-08 来源：新东方在线 发布人：zolo
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In the world, how many people is very happy? Because they are has parents, friends, teachers and so on. They are takes much love for them. So they are very happy。
In present, parents are doing much more anything for their childrens. Including anything in the home. For example, their clothes, their dinner, their friends and so on. In the school, their parents takes them for school by car, by bike and on foot. For their children safe. Today’s children don’t do anything except their parents。
For children alone in the world. For children doing anything alone in the world. Parents makes do exchange themselves。
Parents aren’t do anything for their children. They can do something by themselves. They can with their friends to go to school, to buy something in the story and so on parents should not upset. Allow their children doing themself.
Parents should do anything for their childrens, but doesn’t do all the things for their childrens.