Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
按照这样的思路，“直观评价”句，我们可以采用“倒装+定语后置”的句式来撰写，例如，“Here is a picture, interesting but with thought-provoking implication”。
接着来看“整体描述”句，该句需要对图片中最引人注目的动作加以描述，例句： “As is vividly showed in the photo, a number of people are working busily within a huge and complex net, which successfully captures our eyes”。这个句子，句首和句尾分别是一个非限制性定语从句，主句部分则由“主语+系动词+表语”结构组成。
“细节描述”句，描述的是“能体现寓意的细节”。我们可以写成“After a close watch, it is not difficult to find that the big net is the Internet, through which many people could manage to work together with much convenience and high efficiency but they lack face-to-face communication”。
“过渡句”相对来说，简单一些，我们可以写成“Apparently, what the drawing has subtly conveyed is supposed to be given further analysis”。
Theoretically, the Internet presented by the drawing brings us both advantages and disadvantages. As for my part, the former outweighs its latter. On the top of list is that with the help of Internet, the worldwide economy has developed quickly at a unprecedented pace . In addition, there is the other change that everyone could feel deeply and strongly. It is universally admitted much multifarious work procedures and processes have been cut with the help of Internet. No other case can better illustrate the implication than the picture above.
According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to maximize its positive effects and minimize the disadvantages. Of all the steps, to make full use of the Internet but not to be totally controlled by it tends to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we make the best of the value of it.